Most of this is well done. Your Gong? right around :37 and :43 just doesn't work. The contrast between it and every other sound in the piece is significant enough for it to draw more attention than it needs to and takes away from that section of the piece as a whole. If you still have the project files, I would recommend a higher quality bell sample to achieve your desired message, and a deeper/punchier kick throughout the rest of the piece. I think this piece has a lot of promise.